risingDarkness - Beast From The Depths [Dubstep]

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risingDarkness - Beast From The Depths [Dubstep]

Postby risingDarkness » Mon May 14, 2012 7:04 pm

http://soundcloud.com/risingdarkness/beast-from-the-depths

here, take a listen, i appreciate, almost any kind of comments or opinions. :)

thanks for your attention
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Re: risingDarkness - Beast From The Depths

Postby matias134 » Mon May 14, 2012 7:27 pm

The track is great. Maybe you should adjust the volumen in the general mix.
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Re: risingDarkness - Beast From The Depths [Dubstep]

Postby cfx » Mon May 14, 2012 7:35 pm

:twisted: nice. THIS IS dubstep! (i bought a cd with that name or similar......... and the hole cd is just rubbish...)
breaks are nice and good variation going on i think...
I like the arp also...
I just want to stand in the club right now and freak out to this track :) thats all ;)
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Re: risingDarkness - Beast From The Depths [Dubstep]

Postby risingDarkness » Mon May 14, 2012 8:53 pm

@matias134: i didn't really do anything for mastering or fixing volume, so... jeah. but thanks, maybe i'll do a second version where that thing is better

@slc: hell yeah! thanks!
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Re: risingDarkness - Beast From The Depths [Dubstep]

Postby B0NZ0 » Mon May 14, 2012 9:15 pm

oh my.. this is heavy!
awesome.. what else to say?
i really like that acoustic sounding snare drum!
but for my taste the bass is a little too loud.. just my personal opinion
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Re: risingDarkness - Beast From The Depths [Dubstep]

Postby risingDarkness » Mon May 14, 2012 9:18 pm

B0NZ0 wrote:oh my.. this is heavy!
awesome.. what else to say?
i really like that acoustic sounding snare drum!
but for my taste the bass is a little too loud.. just my personal opinion

haha! when i wrote it, and still i think this is not the limit of heavy, but i couldn't come up with sicker shit without destroying the sound.
actually the snare is layered from some free ones i got randomly.

thank you for your opinions!
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Re: risingDarkness - Beast From The Depths [Dubstep]

Postby LegacyProductions » Tue May 15, 2012 2:48 am

Great use of Fx's. I really like the synths you have. This is some good dubstep, you should be proud.
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Re: risingDarkness - Beast From The Depths [Dubstep]

Postby shroomhead1 » Tue May 15, 2012 12:27 pm

really like the first sound. sound design is really nice. your snare is drowning at some points. maybe sidechain linking it to everything else and clipping its high frequencies a bit would help bring it out more. nice stereo width, in between two breakdowns the high frequencies were actually moving in circles! great sequencing as well. the sine wave pitchbending is a little distracting to my ears I'd take it down to just a 1/8th hit every beat so it supports the rhythm of the following arpeggio. just a thought though. Good work overall.
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Re: risingDarkness - Beast From The Depths [Dubstep]

Postby TrollsInTinFoil2 » Tue May 15, 2012 9:30 pm

honestly im not really a fan of the acoustic drum sounds you used, it doesnt have quite enough punch as it should. still a really good track though.
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Re: risingDarkness - Beast From The Depths [Dubstep]

Postby Msk » Wed May 16, 2012 3:53 pm

Kick need to be changed, because it has no power. Really.

I like the bass at 0:30.

THe drop is too messy.

Work on mixing : )
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