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Few songs.

Postby Mrcowmeat » Fri Jun 15, 2012 12:27 pm

Ya here are some of my songs, gief advice and such ;)

http://soundcloud.com/deepviolet/i-like-u

Older song which doesnt sound good but has a nice idea imho.

http://soundcloud.com/deepviolet/i-feel-disconnected

This was my first attempt at making something glitchy and calm i think its nice in its own way :D

http://soundcloud.com/deepviolet/life-of-a-loner

Some more relaxation music with a touch of hiphop maybe?

http://soundcloud.com/deepviolet/some-classical-piano-for-yer

And last also least. Some piano i made couple of months ago. None of these are remixes :)
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Re: Few songs.

Postby MnilinM » Fri Jun 15, 2012 3:36 pm

Not to be rude, man but:
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That being said, I like your tracks. =P Kinda music I'd listen to if I just wanted to chill out.
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Re: Few songs.

Postby Mrcowmeat » Fri Jun 15, 2012 3:38 pm

Oh My bad, new to this forum D; remove if you wish :)
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Re: Few songs.

Postby Viktor » Fri Jun 15, 2012 9:46 pm

I'll leave it for now but for next time: one at a time
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Re: Few songs.

Postby kiol » Mon Jun 18, 2012 6:10 pm

They are all cool; but in the first one the drums are a bit weak, maybe just because evrything is a bit too loud, in the last one you posted, why are there those loud piano parts, it suddenly starts to get s messy whereas everything is clear and tiny, perfect, except for this part. Good ideas and melodies man ;-)
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Re: Few songs.

Postby fireball3179 » Thu Jun 21, 2012 3:56 pm

im in love with the first song...honestly, i did not expect that at all, drums are a bit drown out, but it was beautiful c': .

second is very ambient, i could see it in like an intro to a horror game. just the intro though, like when they present the intro cut scene, it has almost a feeling of loneliness and insecurity, which would be perfect for introducing the player to this environment.

i feel the third song is almost jazz-y with that guitar in there, but more modernised and broken down, it would sound amazing, if maybe towards the end fade it rain, and end by stripping out everything but leave the rain.

piano is absolutely beautiful. though on the "dramatic mood shift" some notes sound out of key and random i dunno i hear it clash and it drive me mad
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Re: Few songs.

Postby JonCianni » Thu Jul 12, 2012 1:39 am

Soundcloud is only letting me hear i-feel-disconnected, which is pretty slick. I think you could explore into some deeper/more biased panning on some of the delay/reverby sound effects. Lots of opportunity to really tickle the brain with sounds like that.
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