Into Your Eyes - You and What Army [DAST'S DUBSTEP REMIX]

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Into Your Eyes - You and What Army [DAST'S DUBSTEP REMIX]

Postby DAST » Sat Jul 14, 2012 4:44 pm

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Re: Into Your Eyes - You and What Army [DAST'S DUBSTEP REMIX

Postby Xamarl » Sat Jul 14, 2012 8:14 pm

HOLY DAMN!
the only thing i would change is my speaker volume!
reminds me a little bit of Excision/Datsik/Downlink.
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Re: Into Your Eyes - You and What Army [DAST'S DUBSTEP REMIX

Postby TLBF » Sat Jul 14, 2012 10:47 pm

Daaaast, sickkk :)
Over all quite nice.
I'd change the gain of that wobble at 0:55 it's a bit quieter than the rest.
The kick could use some high end to be more audible over the drop.
Final thing, I think you should switch up the vocals before the second drop, to make it less repetitive.

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Re: Into Your Eyes - You and What Army [DAST'S DUBSTEP REMIX

Postby Kreepr » Sun Jul 15, 2012 3:39 am

yeah, the drums are definitely overcompressed, though I'm not the one to be talking about overcompression X)

Oh and you know you layered your kick with your snare, right? Because it sounds muddy as like that real muddy mud you find on the bottom of a real muddy pond. Never do that. Your snare should never have less then (not accurate) 200hz. Like... I'm pretty sure that's a commandment or something "Thou shall not layer a snare with thy kick"
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Re: Into Your Eyes - You and What Army [DAST'S DUBSTEP REMIX

Postby MathusMusic » Mon Jul 16, 2012 7:09 pm

The first thing that came to mind was this: dude. Get your own intro line, that's just the line from First of the Year without the swing lol.
Espeically for your type of dubstep, your kick could use some more power, and pull back the compression a little. Maybe parallel compression (if you're using reason, a pulverizer is a fast way to do that).
I think Kreepr is right about your snare.. not sure about that "commandment" though, but it does sound really muddy down there.

Otherwise, good work, nice basses, etc
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Re: Into Your Eyes - You and What Army [DAST'S DUBSTEP REMIX

Postby 0oshwavyo0 » Thu Jul 19, 2012 10:58 pm

MathusMusic wrote:The first thing that came to mind was this: dude. Get your own intro line, that's just the line from First of the Year without the swing lol.


Because skrillex invented putting a chord stab on the offbeats? That's classic, not unoriginal.

imo I didn't like how you used the vocals (kieran has a nice voice, let us hear it :P) but thats just opinion. Nice basses though, though maybe they could have been turned up and your sub turned down, because it sounds like they are drowned in low end. Don't get me wrong though, I loved the song, just offering my opinions :)
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Re: Into Your Eyes - You and What Army [DAST'S DUBSTEP REMIX

Postby Darcey » Fri Jul 20, 2012 12:11 am

interesting effects with the vocals... not too sure I thought it fit, but I do like how it faded back to somewhat more of a normal vocal... maybe it should incorporate more of the unaltered vox. I liked the music. I like that saw that you used in the drop (the bass was nice too) maybe you could share how you got that sound? (I'm new)
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Re: Into Your Eyes - You and What Army [DAST'S DUBSTEP REMIX

Postby Kreepr » Fri Jul 20, 2012 9:44 am

MathusMusic wrote: dude. Get your own intro line, that's just the line from First of the Year without the swing lol.


I am seriously fighting the urge to circumcise you with a spoon, take the tip and shove it up your ass for saying that.
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Re: Into Your Eyes - You and What Army [DAST'S DUBSTEP REMIX

Postby Pokey » Fri Jul 20, 2012 2:04 pm

Kreepr wrote:"Thou shall not layer a snare with thy kick"

I'm sure house producers would beg to differ :lol: But Kreeps has a point. For a punchy snare like the one you have here, layering with the kick just sounds a little crap...
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Re: Into Your Eyes - You and What Army [DAST'S DUBSTEP REMIX

Postby DAST » Sat Jul 21, 2012 1:12 am

MathusMusic wrote:The first thing that came to mind was this: dude. Get your own intro line

I have my own intro line. I wrote it. Dickhead.
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