The work in progress thread...

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Re: The work in progress thread...

Postby Mau5changedhau5 » Tue Jun 19, 2012 9:57 pm

Ahkmarian wrote: http://soundcloud.com/prog-drummer/in-progress i need some criticism with this short clip, i dont mind the hate, i would like some honesty

Is that just the drop? Or is it an intro? I can't tell because my head phones are broken, but it seems that if it's a drop, it should have a little more bass.
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Re: The work in progress thread...

Postby Dreamless » Wed Jun 20, 2012 5:55 pm

cool place for music here!!most of music tracks are awesome!!

check my song.hope you like it!!!

http://soundcloud.com/dreamlesshammer/analogical
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Re: The work in progress thread...

Postby Loki » Thu Jun 21, 2012 2:25 pm

Dreamless wrote:cool place for music here!!most of music tracks are awesome!!

check my song.hope you like it!!!

http://soundcloud.com/dreamlesshammer/analogical


Nice tune, minimal but I like it ;)
My latest tune - Crawl Space
https://soundcloud.com/k3ton/crawl-space
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Re: The work in progress thread...

Postby EffektEdinburgh » Sat Jul 07, 2012 1:29 pm

http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=sof7FKVT ... ure=vmdshb

our levels remix, tell us what you think, any advice would be awesome!
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Re: The work in progress thread...

Postby MrNiceguy » Tue Jul 10, 2012 2:53 pm

Dreamless wrote:cool place for music here!!most of music tracks are awesome!!

check my song.hope you like it!!!

http://soundcloud.com/dreamlesshammer/analogical


cool feel to this song but that bell thing is way to sharp. you need to take down those piercing high freqs
the brake part is a really cool idea and this is where you need to bring your shit to the table:
first of all you need a base synth right there. try some distorted saw waves with a heavy sub underneath.
also id work on that drum pattern its kinda stale. maybe try add another heavyer snare on just the 2 and 4 beat of the bar. and make the beat loop twice as long so the pattern doesn repeat so often if u know what i mean

great potential here. im imagining some sort of mountain snowstorm level in a videgame :D
Mr. Niceguy - Flat Eric likes it rough [Nu-Rave]
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Re: The work in progress thread...

Postby Special K » Tue Jul 17, 2012 5:34 am

you should defiantly finish these if you haven't already, there sick! great work.
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Re: The work in progress thread...

Postby Kid A » Thu Jul 26, 2012 5:31 pm

Hi, everyone! This is my semi-liquid Drum and Bass song called Breaking Glass. Keep in mind that it's unfinished and unmixed. Also, sorry about the first 10 seconds of silence.

http://soundcloud.com/kidaofficial/breaking-glass-wip
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Re: The work in progress thread...

Postby Dino Kid » Tue Jul 31, 2012 8:24 pm

Sounding cool Kid A, But you definitely need a lot of FX and backing noise to fill out the space, its very empty. Synth work is pretty solid, needs a big of eqing and a bit more reverb in places. Snare is pretty sparse, I think it should be a little more solid, boosting around 150-220hz. Definitely one to finish though keep at it!
If you think my suggestions were good, maybe my music is too: https://soundcloud.com/dinokidofficial/vacuum

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Re: The work in progress thread...

Postby SyndicateDubstepUK » Wed Aug 01, 2012 3:36 am

This is my sound idea, just judge the sound, it hasn't been mastered or anything...


http://soundcloud.com/syndicate_uk/syndicate-drop-it

Thank you :)
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Re: The work in progress thread...

Postby Pollywoppus » Thu Aug 02, 2012 1:57 pm

So I've got this really subtle (in my eyes it's subtle I guess) and calm song that I am working on. I've got the rough draft of it so far and I was wondering what you guys think I should keep, or get rid of?
I'd greatly appreciate the help :)
http://soundcloud.com/pollywoppus-1/subtle-techno-wip
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