I've fixed the levels quite a bit (I even got rid of the overcompressed sound) but can't be arsed to upload it, unless someone asks for it. Thanks!
Trance (perhaps) in progress. Feedback appreciated!
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Re: Trance (perhaps) in progress. Feedback appreciated!
by JannikR » Tue Aug 24, 2010 12:54 am
Dayum. You're right again, as usual I've fixed the levels quite a bit (I even got rid of the overcompressed sound) but can't be arsed to upload it, unless someone asks for it.
Thanks!
I've fixed the levels quite a bit (I even got rid of the overcompressed sound) but can't be arsed to upload it, unless someone asks for it. Thanks!
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Re: Trance (perhaps) in progress. Feedback appreciated!
by pseudonym » Tue Aug 24, 2010 2:37 am
I'd actually like to download it. Why not? It's catchy! 
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Re: Trance (perhaps) in progress. Feedback appreciated!
by JannikR » Tue Aug 24, 2010 10:19 pm
Thanks man, that actually means alot for a dork like me
You should be able to download the original from here:
http://soundcloud.com/jannikr/surfing-the-audiowaves
Cheers again man!
You should be able to download the original from here:
http://soundcloud.com/jannikr/surfing-the-audiowaves
Cheers again man!
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Re: Trance (perhaps) in progress. Feedback appreciated!
by zkytmilad » Wed Aug 25, 2010 10:47 am
I really like the sound of your track! It's great!
Just at 0:25 in the little break.. before you explode again you tried to use a low kick hitting a few times in a row.
Good idea, but I'd try to use another kick for that. This one is very bassy and you need something thats more "kicking". Like the typical Trance kick. Or maybe just use your Snare for that instead of a kick?
Try that, maybe works, maybe not (I'm no pro
)
Other than that: Great work! Keep it up. seems like you have a good ear
Just at 0:25 in the little break.. before you explode again you tried to use a low kick hitting a few times in a row.
Good idea, but I'd try to use another kick for that. This one is very bassy and you need something thats more "kicking". Like the typical Trance kick. Or maybe just use your Snare for that instead of a kick?
Try that, maybe works, maybe not (I'm no pro
)Other than that: Great work! Keep it up. seems like you have a good ear
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