Pritty good try, but what came to my mind is that you have to make something with the kick, it doesnt really fit with the rest of the track.
Then the clap and open hat is way to loud. In your case i would try to make em lower and add some reverb on them, change the pitch on the clap and a little more highend to it.
To my ears i wouldnt call it trance as it is now, but atleast it was a good try for beeing your first track
Keep it up!