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My First Dubstep Banger!!!
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1 - Once you've posted, offer your opinions on another song! That's how this whole system works
2 - The people that have posts that are stickied have given more critiques than they've recieved; They are the ones that deserve your critiques the most. (Updated every 6 hours)
3 - One track at a time.
4 - Post the genre in the topic title, e.g. Da Bassman - Bass fo' Brekfazt [Dubstep]
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My First Dubstep Banger!!!
by dev » Sat Aug 21, 2010 7:46 pm
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Re: My First Dubstep Banger!!!
by Super Alex » Sun Aug 22, 2010 5:29 pm
It's really nothing special. It needs something to make it stand out, ya know?
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Re: My First Dubstep Banger!!!
by D&K » Sun Aug 22, 2010 6:16 pm
Yea, I agree with Super Alex, there's nothing that really makes it unique (I don't mean it's bad at all). So stick some lead synth or vocals or something there to make it sound like you. Also, the snare sounds a bit too loud compared to the other drum hits. Otherwise, I think the track is very well produced especially if this was your first one, so if you keep making tunes, I believe you can make some very good music, just try to find your own style. Keep it up!
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Re: My First Dubstep Banger!!!
by pseudonym » Mon Aug 23, 2010 12:28 am
I agree. It needs a lead synth to make it unique, although I do like how you modulated that high synth (not the wobble itself. it sounds like some sort of filter modulation). I don't listen to a whole lot of dubstep, so I don't really know if this is unique. Also, I agree that the snare is way to loud.
Try making the wobble rate on the bass the same as the kick when the kick goes to 16th notes (like around 1:28). I find it gives the track a cool pumping sound. Maybe add some hi hats to make it roll along, too. And as D&K said, find your own style. Experiment to find what fits.
But for your first dubstep track it sounds pretty good. Keep going!
Try making the wobble rate on the bass the same as the kick when the kick goes to 16th notes (like around 1:28). I find it gives the track a cool pumping sound. Maybe add some hi hats to make it roll along, too. And as D&K said, find your own style. Experiment to find what fits.
But for your first dubstep track it sounds pretty good. Keep going!
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