What do you think?

[JDBryne]

Hi at all

Here is another Dubstep track. I need help in the arrangement. What do you think about the not finished track?

http://soundcloud.com/user3489142/jdbryne-22-07-2010-dubstep?utm_source=soundcloud&utm_campaign=share&utm_medium=facebook&utm_content=http%3A%2F%2Fsoundcloud.com%2Fuser3489142%2Fjdbryne-22-07-2010-dubstep


Best wishes JDBryne

[D&K]

Try layering another kick with more low end on top the one you got there, I can't feel the kick as much as I should (though might be just my my headphones). Otherwise sounds good so far, just keep working with it!

- Kale

PS. Can't say anything about the arrangement, I can't perceive tracks too well without seeing the reason file. Arrangement sounds good to me.

[JannikR]

Just like above said, the kick need more hmm greatness to it, it seems kinda thin as it is now.
The rest of the track sounds nice though, maybe a little more bass over all would be nice.
Post again when you've got an update !

[pseudonym]

Yea, definitely needs a lot more bass. It sounds like its coming from some crappy $10 headphones. The arrangement seems fine to me.

Just as D&K said, keep on working with it.

[JDBryne]

thank for the answers. yeah i will add another kick, and do something for the low end.

i working on it and will upload when i do this things.

greeez JD

[JDBryne]

So i worked a little bit and voila a new version of the dubstep song is finished.

I add a new Kick, and gain the subbass. also i did the track a bit more darker at some points.

here it is,
http://soundcloud.com/jdbryne/22-07-2010dubstep10

greez JDBryne