Some kind of liquid Song unfinished Leave Feedback Please :)

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Some kind of liquid Song unfinished Leave Feedback Please :)

Postby Mynit » Thu Aug 26, 2010 11:09 pm

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Re: Some kind of liquid Song unfinished Leave Feedback Please :)

Postby pseudonym » Fri Aug 27, 2010 12:31 am

You need a break on top of the kick and snare instead of just making the hihat fast. Makes it flow better. I like the piano melody. Keep working at it! :D
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