YAWA- Into your Eyes (DnB Remix)(DNB DRUM TUT)

[fulfordpr]

KILLER KRAZZY COMPOSITION COMPETITION!

(I'd like to note, that ALL drum samples can be found here on boyinaband.com)
http://soundcloud.com/killerkrazzy/yawa-into-your-eyes-killer

TUTORIAL FOR DRUMZ!!!!

[NewAgeJazz]

This is great, but it could use a lot more bass.

[Dicto Simpliciter]

Your vocals seem too far in front in your mix of everything else. Like the classic jungle drums though, maybe you could do a tutorial on that.

[NuclearHobbit]

wow thats some crazy shit man
i think a tutorial on the drums would be awesome, sounds like you spent alot of time on them

[Alex Birch]

hey man cool track, i think ye it could do with a little more low end overall on the track with the sub and kick its sounds a little tinny atm but it could be my listening environment i will have a listen again on a different set of speakers in abit . the drums are pretty sick tho some cool stuff goin on. nice track man
but ye a tutorial on the drums would be cool i think, u got some interesting things goin on with em.

[fulfordpr]

ok, sounds like im doing a drum tutorial

[fulfordpr]

tutorial is up!!!

[UniversalSidechain]

Hello dude, that's an excellent remix, the master sounds proper to me and your edit is interresting (I like the way you made us "impatient" before the first drop). Now, I have the feeling that you've put a HP Filter on your drum, it lacks of lowends espacially on the kick and snare and btw, you used too many times the same snare try maybe to use a "ghost" snare to make the repetition during your beat (dave made a tutorial on this, have a thought). However, what I like in your drums is that they are very complicated and sophisticated.
You did great job on the vocals, with a really nice sutter effect and you've had a sample of Dave saying "Hi!" which made me giggle, thumb up for this! (But they are maybe too present, level them a little bit down)
During the overall song, I felt it needs something more, and this is bass! You need more bass and a speaker shacking sub! If you add these, your remix would be much better.
Synthes are interesting to me, I have nothin' to add on them, I had the feeling you've used the "arp" sample isn't it? Great job!

[Cheyenne.Kavanagh]

Hey, The song is really cool but I think in the beginning the pad sounds out of time and out of place. A solution would be to warp it to the beats and on the off beat where the pad mutes place your drum samples there. I also thought your tracks stereo variety wasn't too great meaning most synths were mono. Try putting the pad or the arp in complete stereo using the Utility tool in Ableton and turn the amount to 200%. Also as said before try increasing your sub bass in your mix but other then those things your song was interesting and different to the others. Good Luck