Hi,
I want you to listen to this goa music without intro and then tell me what you think about it.
Note that i am aware that some things are too low on volume, I wont change it right now, because cba. i worked hard for this one even tho' I just started it yesterday!
http://soundcloud.com/therebythetrees/enter-flute-finished-track
*edited with intro*
*edited with full track*
Psytrance
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Psytrance
by xTherebythetrees » Thu Mar 15, 2012 10:45 pm
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Re: Psytrance
by Ikeproductions89 » Sat Mar 17, 2012 10:20 pm
i really like the bass after the intro
the composing in this is really good.
maybe notch out a little high end in that fluteish lead, its a little overbearing
If you want the drop to hit harder, try cutting off 30-60 hz in the intro and see what that does
the composing in this is really good.
maybe notch out a little high end in that fluteish lead, its a little overbearing
If you want the drop to hit harder, try cutting off 30-60 hz in the intro and see what that does
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Re: Psytrance
by mmGhost » Tue Mar 20, 2012 12:05 am
Psytrance happens to be a favorite of mine. I love listening to it while I'm running...gets me pumped! enough about me...
Your drop is sick. I think it really kicks. I wasn't expecting the kick to be so punchEEEE! nice man. Can't go wrong with some acid bass, although I think it needs to be mixed with the kick a little bit better.
I know you specifically asked us to not comment on overall levels, but I have to say that it makes a big difference. You have some nice atmos going on in the track, but they are a bit too low to really feel them. Maybe send all of that stuff through a deeper reverb to give it that mystical touch!
A rolling arpeggiated synth would really add to this I think. Something that is more rhythmic with some filter automation would really make this track pop.
I fiddle with psytrance, you can check it out on my soundcloud page (linked in signature). It's hard to produce, and make really punch, but I think you did a nice job with this one.
Your drop is sick. I think it really kicks. I wasn't expecting the kick to be so punchEEEE! nice man. Can't go wrong with some acid bass, although I think it needs to be mixed with the kick a little bit better.
I know you specifically asked us to not comment on overall levels, but I have to say that it makes a big difference. You have some nice atmos going on in the track, but they are a bit too low to really feel them. Maybe send all of that stuff through a deeper reverb to give it that mystical touch!
A rolling arpeggiated synth would really add to this I think. Something that is more rhythmic with some filter automation would really make this track pop.
I fiddle with psytrance, you can check it out on my soundcloud page (linked in signature). It's hard to produce, and make really punch, but I think you did a nice job with this one.
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