Lullaby Bay

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Lullaby Bay

Postby MisterThomasRose » Thu Aug 19, 2010 1:43 pm

Super chilled out, no where near as heavy as what i usually make.. oh well guess that's the meaning of creativity..

Might not be up your alley, oh well

Let me know what you think

http://soundcloud.com/thomasrose/lullaby-bay
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Re: Lullaby Bay

Postby Statch » Thu Aug 19, 2010 2:47 pm

This track sounds lush. You've managed to get a nice bright sound on that harp which nicely drives the whole track. I particularly like what you've done with the effects on the strings. My only criticism is that the sweepy fx sound a bit too harsh in some parts. Maybe try focusing on the low-mid range rather than the high frequencies.
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Re: Lullaby Bay

Postby MisterThomasRose » Thu Aug 19, 2010 9:49 pm

Hey man thanks heaps for listening, totally agree, after a few listens i found that too, think it was a case of being too excited and just wanting to get the track out.

But thanks man 'lush', i like that =)
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Re: Lullaby Bay

Postby Statch » Thu Aug 19, 2010 10:06 pm

Haha, know that feeling all too well. Are you using reason? I'd love to remix this if u'd let me.
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Re: Lullaby Bay

Postby MisterThomasRose » Thu Aug 19, 2010 11:30 pm

Ok so i fiddled around with the track a bit, the guitar at the end was just far too quiet.. woops. must have missed that.

Sure dude i'd love for you to remix it. You want the rns flie?
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Re: Lullaby Bay

Postby Statch » Thu Aug 19, 2010 11:33 pm

Sweet. Just send us a link n I'll see what I can do.
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Re: Lullaby Bay

Postby MisterThomasRose » Fri Aug 20, 2010 12:21 am

give me you e mail. I'll send it through
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Re: Lullaby Bay

Postby Statch » Fri Aug 20, 2010 3:54 pm

Sent you a PM.
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