[80s Lite Electric Funk]

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[80s Lite Electric Funk]

Postby bambi » Sat Apr 21, 2012 4:48 pm

Last edited by bambi on Fri May 25, 2012 3:22 am, edited 8 times in total.
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Re: [80s Lite Electric Funk]

Postby diatonic » Sat Apr 21, 2012 5:48 pm

as a huge fan of funk and funk accessories, I approve of this song
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Re: [80s Lite Electric Funk]

Postby hauntamusic » Sun Apr 22, 2012 12:35 am

sweeet. d-.-b
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Re: [80s Lite Electric Funk]

Postby nineofkings » Sun Apr 22, 2012 4:39 pm

Sounds extremely 80's, in an awesome way. Love the percussion, the brass sounds, and everything. I'd make the snare a little brighter though, to stand out a bit more.
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Re: [80s Lite Electric Funk]

Postby 42TheFloorBeats » Mon Apr 23, 2012 8:55 pm

i agree on the snare. Maybe could even pump the bass sound up a bit
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Re: [80s Lite Electric Funk]

Postby mmGhost » Mon Apr 23, 2012 9:17 pm

I just had to listen to this when I saw '80s in there :) Good work. Mix down sounds great. Good use of FX...arrangement is cool too. Doesn't get boring. Brought a smile to my face :).

Maybe some more builds/drops/risers to create some tension/release? Nice to hear something unique on here!
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Re: [80s Lite Electric Funk]

Postby brandio » Tue Apr 24, 2012 4:22 am

Very dreamy vibes to this. Im really digging the arp sounding lead and the bass. The subtle reverbed vox samples also add a lot to the track. The only complaint I have has already been stated, the snare =p. Nice song though would make perfect night driving music.
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Re: [80s Lite Electric Funk]

Postby Judas » Tue Apr 24, 2012 7:26 pm

The title of this thread is awesome! :P And the track is awesome, nothing wrong with the composition in my opinion, maybe the mix needs a little work, and maybe add some kind of a build up?
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Re: [80s Lite Electric Funk]

Postby bambi » Wed Apr 25, 2012 12:26 am

thanks for all the feedback and criticism, i really appreciate it! unfortunately i can't edit the snare because i lost the project file.
however i managed to brighten it slightly with external eq.
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Re: [80s Lite Electric Funk]

Postby Toad Wrench » Wed Apr 25, 2012 11:36 pm

This should really had some vocals on it! Would have made an excellent electropop song! Too bad you lost the file...
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