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1 - Once you've posted, offer your opinions on another song! That's how this whole system works 2 - The people that have posts that are stickied have given more critiques than they've recieved; They are the ones that deserve your critiques the most. (Updated every 6 hours) 3 - One track at a time. 4 - Post the genre in the topic title, e.g. Da Bassman - Bass fo' Brekfazt [Dubstep]
That arp in the intro could use some more atmospheric placing, reverb, delays, ... It's kinda empty as of now. The drop is friggin AWESOME. Try making some synths more stereo for a "fatter" effect. Maybe layer the lead with a quiet really stereo supersaw with loads of reverb or something.
I really like the break at 1.16, really builds tension, and I alos like hearing the voice in that section a little clearer than the rest of the song. I would add a little low end to the main synth, but otherwise I really like this track.