Take Over Control - Afrojack (DAST REMIX)

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Re: Take Over Control - Afrojack (DAST REMIX)

Postby Rmonik » Thu May 10, 2012 3:00 pm

That arp in the intro could use some more atmospheric placing, reverb, delays, ... It's kinda empty as of now. The drop is friggin AWESOME. Try making some synths more stereo for a "fatter" effect. Maybe layer the lead with a quiet really stereo supersaw with loads of reverb or something.
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Re: Take Over Control - Afrojack (DAST REMIX)

Postby Ill City » Sun May 13, 2012 9:41 am

Like the drop, it is really insane thing. Like your drum and you're lead are okay to me, great stuff:)
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Re: Take Over Control - Afrojack (DAST REMIX)

Postby onewaylimited » Sun May 13, 2012 5:28 pm

I really like the break at 1.16, really builds tension, and I alos like hearing the voice in that section a little clearer than the rest of the song. I would add a little low end to the main synth, but otherwise I really like this track.
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Re: Take Over Control - Afrojack (DAST REMIX)

Postby Ampcast » Sun May 13, 2012 9:32 pm

Compress that kick! Love the whole track but that kick is weak! Apart from that. this track is dope.
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Re: Take Over Control - Afrojack (DAST REMIX)

Postby MikMiki » Mon May 14, 2012 5:38 am

Nice remix, it all sounds mixed well, mastered well though could use some slight work, great beat and rhythm. Though if there's one flaw I should point out, it's that it's too short!!
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Re: Take Over Control - Afrojack (DAST REMIX)

Postby SocialDucky » Wed May 16, 2012 2:46 am

The intro seems a bit chaotic to me, you should turn down the first synth, and maybe eq the vocals' high end :D
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Re: Take Over Control - Afrojack (DAST REMIX)

Postby Dr. Lakata » Sat May 19, 2012 8:25 pm

The vocal processing is really good, and I really like the width the whole track has!
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Re: Take Over Control - Afrojack (DAST REMIX)

Postby Pokey » Tue May 22, 2012 12:20 pm

The first arp sound seems a bit too dry for me, maybe add a touch of reverb to it just to make it sit a bit better.
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Re: Take Over Control - Afrojack (DAST REMIX)

Postby AJaY_Redstar » Tue May 22, 2012 5:25 pm

AWESOME FRIKKEN JOB DAST!!! I see you will go places bro! keep up the good work!
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