Spacewalk [Dubstep/Dub]

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Re: Spacewalk [Dubstep/Dub]

Postby ConfusionGrows » Sat May 19, 2012 9:25 pm

I'm bumping this, because now it's finished!
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Re: Spacewalk [Dubstep/Dub]

Postby Dino Kid » Sun May 20, 2012 12:03 am

As I've said before, very funky and cool. I really like the drum part and the melody is very catchy. Thanks for the download!
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Re: Spacewalk [Dubstep/Dub]

Postby AJaY_Redstar » Mon May 21, 2012 10:38 pm

Gotta love the vibe and theme of this track. You did an awesome job with this one I feel like I am walking in space lol. Hey I invite you to check out my new dubstep track "Worldz Collide" I think you might like it =) I always appreciate a comment! http://soundcloud.com/ajay-2/01-worldz-collide
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Re: Spacewalk [Dubstep/Dub]

Postby FiSHB4TiCuS » Tue May 22, 2012 12:11 am

The background synth comes into the mix nicely. Kick is nice and beefy too! Your sounds fit a nice theme together, well done.
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Re: Spacewalk [Dubstep/Dub]

Postby mateogonzalez » Tue May 22, 2012 2:38 am

i found that it was kinda drowned in reverb!
try to not have all the isntruments with reverb, remember one of them has to have some sort of clarity in the mix or else nothing will really stand out
try it out!
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Re: Spacewalk [Dubstep/Dub]

Postby Hor1zon » Tue May 22, 2012 1:30 pm

mateogonzalez wrote:i found that it was kinda drowned in reverb!
try to not have all the isntruments with reverb, remember one of them has to have some sort of clarity in the mix or else nothing will really stand out
try it out!


In dub everything is meant to be drowned in reverb and delay, it adds a spacey feel.
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Re: Spacewalk [Dubstep/Dub]

Postby Gastly » Thu May 24, 2012 9:38 am

YES
That is all that needs to be said, Lovin' some spacey dub at the minute so this is perfect, you got the swag and swing,
only thing I would do extra is whack a long note Organ (Hammond B3) along with that spacey lead (Also needz more phaz0rzzz)
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Re: Spacewalk [Dubstep/Dub]

Postby Dr. Lakata » Fri May 25, 2012 5:35 am

So metroid-esque with those gildey lead sounds.. The drums are particularly neat, like the acoustic feel, and that detuned bass is a great idea too.
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Re: Spacewalk [Dubstep/Dub]

Postby qumquat » Sat May 26, 2012 7:32 pm

Very nice, I LOVE the realistic drums in the beginning. I think you need put some variations on the main melody though, gets a bit too boring after a while
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Re: Spacewalk [Dubstep/Dub]

Postby 0oshwavyo0 » Tue May 29, 2012 1:03 am

Like that person ajay said in the soundcloud comments, I seriously think you should consider doing a vocal version with a reggae singer on it. It would sound SO good.
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