The work in progress thread...

Share your songs here to get constructive criticism from members and maybe make some new fans!
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1 - Once you've posted, offer your opinions on another song! That's how this whole system works :)
2 - The people that have posts that are stickied have given more critiques than they've recieved; They are the ones that deserve your critiques the most. (Updated every 6 hours)
3 - One track at a time.
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Re: The work in progress thread...

Postby Loki » Sat May 12, 2012 8:17 pm

For some reason my posts aren't showing in the 'Share your music' thread, so I thought I'd post my new tune here for your review ;)

http://soundcloud.com/k3ton/retribution
My latest tune - Crawl Space
https://soundcloud.com/k3ton/crawl-space
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Re: The work in progress thread...

Postby mastermerrick » Mon May 14, 2012 4:13 am

This is my first attempt at something on Reason. I would like to go further, but I've hit a massive roadblock as to "Where to next?" And now I'm in a rut.

http://soundcloud.com/j-a-x-kaedrin/mastermerricks-work-in

Any suggestions/comments/gripes?
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Re: The work in progress thread...

Postby Ripley Sterling » Mon May 14, 2012 3:16 pm

generally, i just listen to the song on loop and try to imagine what comes immediately next. sounds like you can easily do some more layering/expansion on that higher lead synth.
if you want me to listen to something, or chat about music or... idk... here's my Skype: deep basin
https://twitter.com/ripleySterling
Here's some tunes
http://soundcloud.com/ripleysterling/sets/jump-the-gun-ep/
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Re: The work in progress thread...

Postby Msk » Wed May 16, 2012 8:07 pm

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Re: The work in progress thread...

Postby DjVinnie91 » Thu May 17, 2012 2:16 am

Here we go.. A real trancing banger.. Work in progress though

http://soundcloud.com/djvinnie91/trance-16may2012-1

Enjoy and please let me know what you think :)
Lost Angel - Illusive Dream (The Reverend Remix)
http://soundcloud.com/djvinnie91/lost-angel-illusive-dream-the-fin

Vinn!e Pres. The Reverend - Sanctuary (Original Mix)
http://soundcloud.com/blacksunsetmusic/blk019-the-reverend-sanctuary
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Re: The work in progress thread...

Postby Msk » Thu May 17, 2012 6:43 pm

http://www24.zippyshare.com/v/9098115/file.html

My mainstream remix of C. Harris and Neyo.

For now i have only intro. Lame drop will be changed : )
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Re: The work in progress thread...

Postby vince » Sat May 19, 2012 3:43 pm

Hello guys, this is my very first attempt at producing music. Of course this is not even near to finished and needs much more variation :D
I tried to do some liquid drum & bass here. The idea was to start off with this cracklin/jammed/retro type of sound which then goes over into some spacey atmospheric piano thingy followed by something more energic. I only spent maybe 2 hours on it, i never done something like this before and i hope anyone out there can give me some tips for improvement...
sorry for my bad english, i'm not a native speaker :(
http://soundcloud.com/vincednb/liquid-dnb-wip
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Re: The work in progress thread...

Postby Anteara » Sun May 20, 2012 12:45 pm

@Vince, I like it, there are some parts where the timing sounds off a bit though. But it's great for a first attempt. I'm in the same boat as you (new producer) so hopefully someone will be able to further critique your first piece. It does have an awesome emotional feel to it though, in my opinion, which is awesome.


Here is my second song I've made, and first song made in Ableton. It's based off the windmill song from Zelda. As the title says, its around 50% done in my opinion...
There are some timing and peaking issues I've noticed.


http://soundcloud.com/anteara/windmill-song-50
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Re: The work in progress thread...

Postby vince » Sun May 20, 2012 1:55 pm

thanks for your comment, good luck in your future production ;)
on oyur track.. man i LOVE Zelda and it's songs... your attempt is great although i dont really like this 'dirty' type of music ;)
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Re: The work in progress thread...

Postby DayOne » Mon May 21, 2012 9:52 am

VERY early WIP.

Tell me what you think, all feedback is welcome!

http://soundcloud.com/day_one/new-wip/s-a3Hs7
runemopar wrote:Less complaining. More sexy rumpus.


https://soundcloud.com/edenscoming/edens-coming-city-night

Taste the rainbow, MOTHERFUCKER!
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