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I find it hard to judge frequencies sometimes. This sounds fairly clear to me to be honest, it doesn't have that oppressive feel a muddy mix usually does. I like this a lot, it's very smooth and your blippy and keyboard like synths are great sounds. The only thing I thought might be worthy of attention is that the kick feels a little top heavy. This might be because I think your bassline - which I quite like too - and it are sort of working on the same kind of frequencies, is there a pitch envelope on the bassline giving it that attack? This is making some of the lower part of the kick drum a little harder to make out or feel on my headphones (which I assure you I can feel kick drums on)! The ending's a bit abrupt, is this finished yet?
a couple of things: that kick is really thin and needs more punch and sub. also id work abit more on that baseline. its just not that good a melody the first to lines are cool but the third throws it off abit. so does the next part