Voices (House)

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Voices (House)

Postby ridcully123 » Tue Jun 05, 2012 5:02 am

More deep house, a bit more melodic, I think there might be some muddled freqs in the middle. Tell me what you think :)
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Re: Voices (House)

Postby ConfusionGrows » Tue Jun 26, 2012 12:05 am

I find it hard to judge frequencies sometimes. This sounds fairly clear to me to be honest, it doesn't have that oppressive feel a muddy mix usually does. I like this a lot, it's very smooth and your blippy and keyboard like synths are great sounds. The only thing I thought might be worthy of attention is that the kick feels a little top heavy. This might be because I think your bassline - which I quite like too - and it are sort of working on the same kind of frequencies, is there a pitch envelope on the bassline giving it that attack? This is making some of the lower part of the kick drum a little harder to make out or feel on my headphones (which I assure you I can feel kick drums on)! The ending's a bit abrupt, is this finished yet?
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Re: Voices (House)

Postby TheOfficialT.E.C.T. » Wed Jun 27, 2012 2:34 pm

Try using a bit of that classic progressive bass near the middle, and you should think about boosting the volume bit. Overall you have a great song.
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Re: Voices (House)

Postby matias134 » Wed Jun 27, 2012 9:21 pm

I love you track, it's very melodic and progressive. Like TheOfgiakT.E.C.T said, boost the volume a bit.
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Re: Voices (House)

Postby DamClass » Wed Jun 27, 2012 9:47 pm

This is crystal clear IMO. Though I get less of a housey EDM vibe and more of, say, a soundtrack vibe, to a video game or something along those lines. It's quite nice though. :)
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Re: Voices (House)

Postby MrNiceguy » Sat Jun 30, 2012 10:58 am

dat intro <3

a couple of things: that kick is really thin and needs more punch and sub. also id work abit more on that baseline. its just not that good a melody the first to lines are cool but the third throws it off abit. so does the next part
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