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ZEN [Chillstep]
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1 - Once you've posted, offer your opinions on another song! That's how this whole system works
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ZEN [Chillstep]
by Tin0 » Sun Jun 24, 2012 9:35 am
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Re: ZEN [Chillstep]
by MrNiceguy » Sun Jun 24, 2012 12:31 pm
this is pretty nice man.
i like the distortion crackeling thing.
i feel the big bass is abit to big for the chill feel maybe lower it abit.
i also think you can do something more to that snare to make it abit grander maybe widening it, put on an eccho, maybe layer it with a more acoustic sounding snare. it just sounds a bit chippy at the moment
i like the distortion crackeling thing.
i feel the big bass is abit to big for the chill feel maybe lower it abit.
i also think you can do something more to that snare to make it abit grander maybe widening it, put on an eccho, maybe layer it with a more acoustic sounding snare. it just sounds a bit chippy at the moment
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Re: ZEN [Chillstep]
by DamClass » Sun Jun 24, 2012 9:29 pm
Yeah, a snappier snare with some reverb to draw it out a bit would sound great here.
The rest of the percussion is really great for the "chill" vibe. Making the rest of the instrumentation more subtle and less in-your-face would help as well.
The rest of the percussion is really great for the "chill" vibe. Making the rest of the instrumentation more subtle and less in-your-face would help as well.
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Re: ZEN [Chillstep]
by d1n0 » Tue Jun 26, 2012 3:14 pm
As said, the baslines are a bit too loud, but imo maybe also a bit too aggressive. I myself found it a bit hard to "chill" to this tune.
But overall a great track ^^
But overall a great track ^^
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Re: ZEN [Chillstep]
by Zer0dubstep » Wed Jun 27, 2012 3:26 am
Haha, I was right ready to chill and then i got slapped with a bass. Its kind of like a Ferrari in the ghetto, its really nice, its just really out of place where it is. Put some reverb and delay on that snare man! Its too dry for this song. Also, chillstep can have different levels of energy too, its just a different feel. This thing is kind of one leveled you know? Got some great elements though.
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Re: ZEN [Chillstep]
by Gastly » Thu Jun 28, 2012 12:50 pm
It seems to harsh to be chill, but that said It's a pretty good track, look into Eq automation on that main bass that'd really make this track
Like the little delayed animal noise (I think that's what it is)
Like the little delayed animal noise (I think that's what it is)
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Re: ZEN [Chillstep]
by PhattyLongLegs » Fri Jun 29, 2012 4:09 am
For my personal taste, intro was sounding dope but the big bass is a little out of place in my opinion. Snare definitely is too poppy and short, drawing that out would bring the track up by alot. But over all real cool track!
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Re: ZEN [Chillstep]
by Tin0 » Fri Jun 29, 2012 6:35 pm
Thank you guys, it feels like I have taken a step in the right direction. Next track with pointers added.
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Re: ZEN [Chillstep]
by BlazeRProds » Sat Jun 30, 2012 8:48 pm
Hey there!
Sweet stuff, really liking the little background chirps and stuff. Great pad work too, nicely entrancing!
- The bass that kicks in is a little to gritty for this kind of track though, I feel. It's a great sound, but not very fitting.
- Maybe add a tad of reverb on the snare
- melody and chord porgression are great!
not much to say otherwise, sweet track!
Keep it up!
Blaze.
Sweet stuff, really liking the little background chirps and stuff. Great pad work too, nicely entrancing!
- The bass that kicks in is a little to gritty for this kind of track though, I feel. It's a great sound, but not very fitting.
- Maybe add a tad of reverb on the snare
- melody and chord porgression are great!
not much to say otherwise, sweet track!
Keep it up!
Blaze.
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