Captain Jose (The Wigger Chicken) Updated! - stepDub

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Captain Jose (The Wigger Chicken) Updated! - stepDub

Postby Kreepr » Tue Jul 03, 2012 2:19 pm

http://soundcloud.com/itspyrax/pyrax-captain-jose-the-wigger/s-WnVqa

Yup. Second track for the EP ;)

Bratkilla helped with the naming of this song lol.

FUCKING TRAP

Need to polish the kick and snare and it's off to fucking UKF? :D (loljk)
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Postby Mehkyx » Tue Jul 03, 2012 2:35 pm

The intro is thick and heavy. I like that lead synth over it, adds a lot of depth at the tail end of the sound. The drop is ridiculously heavy, and I think that the sound is definitely "pulling". I think it's a really cool effect, and I think it really fits. It's also a super groovy track. I like it.
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Postby hellolazlo » Tue Jul 03, 2012 3:42 pm

Love the intro with the chiptune lead. Sounds awesome! The beginning reminds me of Android by Obsidia. Pretty sweet drop too. The drums a thick and punchy and the bass is heavy. Excellent work!

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Postby Kreepr » Wed Jul 04, 2012 2:42 am

Fukken Obsidia... lol

Anyways, thanks. Bump.
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Postby JohnMillhorn » Wed Jul 04, 2012 8:25 am

This track was absolutely fantastic =D I did not expect the chiptune lead at all, and it was a very wonderful surprise. The only negative thing I can really say about this song is in my opinion the transition between the very quiet section and the drop was very abrupt. If that was what you were going for then it's fine, but i think a small swell before that drop would be a nice little touch.
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Postby soimmo_two » Wed Jul 04, 2012 8:36 am

Great work. After 2:32 would be good to add something or change something to keep interest.
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Postby De La Frontera » Wed Jul 04, 2012 11:13 am

Niiiice. Really liking this! The intro is my favourite part, reminds me of old grimey dubstep, which is definitely a good thing.

Your production is pretty much spot on, your snares are ridiculously punchy! Excellent EQing/compression work there. And I completely agree with the 8-bit lead, such a cool touch.

Not a lot else to say really, great job! :D
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Re: Captain Jose (The Wigger Chicken) - stepDub

Postby Kreepr » Wed Jul 04, 2012 12:31 pm

soimmo_two wrote:Great work. After 2:32 would be good to add something or change something to keep interest.


I know. I need to add some variation, but I don't know what to do X)

At exactly that point I added a trap beat, melody, backing synth and a whole shit ton of variation from the actual composition. Sounding crispy as fuck.

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Postby Kreepr » Wed Jul 04, 2012 5:47 pm

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Postby aigee » Sat Jul 07, 2012 8:10 am

dam those are some pretty phat drum samples, the pad in the background make it sound amazing. GREAT job in the transitions. that drop is freakin heavy i love how it glides from one thing to another, AMAZING TRACK man keep up the good work
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